Thursday, January 24, 2013

My argumentative esay~~


Did you know that there is a school, that pays students for doing well ? Didn't you ever dream about getting money as a reward for doing well in school? Well, there is a school that pays for students who got an excellent on the state exams. However, students should not be paid for doing well in school. Since there is a real example of a school that pays students, I will mostly use South Lawn Elementary as  an evidence. Briefly, my 3 reasons are that the money is the local taxes, students are only good at subjects that are paid, and the only motivation is money.
The first reason is that the money is the local taxes of people. If the school gives the students money, where does the money come from? The taxes! If schools pay students, the amount of taxes will rise. To take a look at the South Lawn Elementary school, Coshocton is not that wealthy, but people have to pay more local taxes, for South Lawn Elementary , than other places.
 The second reason is that students are only good at subjects that are paid. If you can be paid if you get an excellent on Math, and you get nothing when you get an excellent in social studies, what will you study for? Of course, math! This is what is happening in South Lawn Elementary School. The students only study for the subjects that are paid, so their test scores are lower than average at social studies, science, reading.
 The third reason is that the only motivation is money. There was an interview with the students who got cash because of the state exam.
Interviewer:  Was the money the thing that motivated you the most?
Students: Yes. Of course. Mostly because of the amount of money we got was huge. (They got $100 for total.)
 Now I would like to explain about some oppositing ideas who support paying students.
The first reason is that children will do well on their exams. Of course they will do well on the subjects that are paid, but what about the subjects that aren’t? Schools can’t afford money for every subject So as I said before, the students of South Lawn Elementary are under average on social studies, and other subjects.
The second reason that the opposition side might say, is that students will study harder by a strong motivation. Money is a strong motivation to students, and it affects students of South Lawn Elementary School because of the amount. However, it does not mean that the students will study hard forever. Students will not study hard if the teachers or parents does not give a reward. Actually, this is what Eric Bettinger, a Stanford University professor who is managing the program, is worried about. Also, the students say that they missed the money that was given.
In conclusion, these were the reasons that I think students should not be paid for doing well in school. The reasons were that the money is the local taxes, students are only good at subjects that are paid, and the only motivation is money. Even though it might be interesting to get paid for doing well, it will bring many disadvantages and damage to students.

Monday, January 21, 2013

My short story!


In week 3, we learned about short stories, and I want to explain them to you.


Drabble: a short story with exactly 100 words.

Flash Fiction: a about 1000 words. Includes a conflict, resolution, environment (setting), dialogue, and a chracter

Viggnette: a snap shot of words


And I wrote my first drabble!





Do you know what the moon is made out of? Some say cheese, but than, it would be too sticky for astronauts to walk! So, the truth is, the moon is, pear! So you see, a giant pear was created. It was really giant and heavy. It rolled around the world, and arrived at Africa. The people loved the pear and started to eat it. The holes we see on the moon are where the people ate! The pear helped solving starvation, but killed many people rolling over them. So people shot the pear up and it became the moon!




Sunday, January 20, 2013

A Response Essay to the movie "Brave"

 Have you ever seen the movie, 'Brave'? It is about a princess Merida, who is different from the Disney princesses we know. Even though Merilda's personality is unique, I did not like the movie that much.

 Before I begin, I want to tell you the summary of 'Brave'.'Brave has 2 big topics: first, the relationship between Merida and her mother, and second, Merida changing her fate. Merida was a very active girl. She loved to ride horses, shoot arrows, and do naughty things. However, her mother wanted Merida to be a nice, calm, wise girl, because she will soon be the queen. Time flew and it was the day for Merida;s marrige. Merida didn't want to be married, and had a conflict with her mother. Merida and her mother both god mad. Merida;s mother threw Merida's bow, and Merida ripped the cloth between Merida and her mother. Because the bow was Merida;s favorite, Merida ran out of the house and met a witch. Merida asked the witch to change Merida's mother, and the witch gave Merida a spell. The spell made Merida;s mother a bear, and Merida then tries to chage her mother back into a bear.

 The first reason why I didn't like 'Brave' was because it was too unrealistic. Of course, movies and animations are unrealistic, but 'Brave' may confuse naive children. The most unrealistic character was the wisps. A witch may be in an animation, and help the story's flow. However, if young children watch this movie, they might think that when they have a hard time doing something, wisps will appear and show them their path. then, the children will try to  rely on something, or someone else, when they should be solving  the problem.

 The second reason is that there was a useless part. When Merida found the witch's house, and the witch chased Merida away, Merida gave the witch a necklace. The witch's face and her act was very suspicious, but the necklace wasn't mentioned again in the movie.  Also, after the witch tells Merida about how to end the spell, the witch disappeared entirely. It feels like some characters were made temporarily just to make the story continue.

 The third reason is that the story is too obvious. Disney movies with princesses always ends with a happy ending. Even though the movie didn't say happily ever after, the movie ended with a happy ending, again! It would be more interesting if there was another type of ending, a twist.

 The final reason is that it feels like the story did not end. After Merida's mother becomes a human again, and Merida and Merida's mother apologizes to each other, the movie ends with some words  about changing our fate. I really wanted to know what happened nest. What happened to the witch? What happened to Merida and her mother? What happened to Merida's country? It might be intentionally left open to our imagination, but I think it leaves the audience to feel awkward because there wasn't any conclusion.


 In conclusion, I thought the movie 'Brave' was not a good movie. I had four reasons explaining why. The movie does give a moral, but not in a realistic way. The movie had an interesting plot, but had an obvious ending. The movie had a great flow, but used too many temporary characters and useless scenes. Finally, the movie had a touching ending, but make it feel like the story did not end. Try watching the movie 'Brave', and don't forget to tell me how you felt about it.

Thursday, January 10, 2013

My first diamante poem~




This is my first diamante poem~!^^


Cats
wise    clean
climbing  sleeping  meowing
Yangi    whiskers    tigers    lions
growling   fighting   playing
 cute    scary
                         Sap


Yangi: A name of my cat if I had one
Sap: A name of my tiger if I had one



Do you want to write
 a diamante poem too?

I will tell you how.

Just follow the colors!

noun
adjective adjective
-ing verb  -ing verb  -ing verb
noun        noun       noun       noun 
-ing verb  -ing verb  -ing verb
adjective   adjective
noun


After the 4th line
2nd noun, change the topic!






Wish you good luck!

My first ode~~



Dear my lovely feet

 You are smelly, with wiggly toes, and you may be gross, and disgusting too. You are the bottom of my big body, and you are the last of my big body. You are weak, need socks and shoes, and you can not run well, without sneakers too. You are dirty, you are sometimes covered with mud. Most people dislike you greatly, but I'm unlike others, I love you greatly.


 I know you are the best. I know you are modest. I know that you are gentle more than soft cotton. You have done more things than any other. More things than my legs, more things than my hands, more things than my bones, and Sh! my 5 senses too.


 You've been behind me, when I won the race. You lended me your hand, when I lost my pace. You gave me the winning cup, when it belonged to you. I've got the certificate, when it should be awarded to you.


 Thank you for everything, thank you for it all. Thank you for teaching me, about your sacrificing act. Thank you for all your effort, to make me get the honor. Thank you my lovely feet, thank you my pleasing feet. I hope this ode can be a payback for all the things you've done. Thank you, my feet.

                                                                                                           From,
                                                                                                          Yujung
I love you feet~~


Tuesday, January 8, 2013

My 30 Day Challenge!^^

I've felt I was stuck in a rut because I continue doing something I am not interested in again and again, so I have made 30-day challenges for me.Let me tell you about my 30-day challenge.

         Habits I want to ADD 

  • Waking up at 6 A.M. sharp
  • Being interested in math
  • Studying science every day
  • Concentrating on my study
  • Eating Kimchi 


        



        Habits I want to SUBTRACT
  • Being lazy
  • Playing games
  • Eating too sugary food
  • Not concentrating on studying
 Goal 1: Waking up at 6 A.M. sharp
What steps do I need to take to achieve this goal?
  Step 1: I have to sleep deeply
  Step 2: I shouldn't be tired very much the day before
  Step 3: I have to sleep early, like 11 or 11:20

 Goal 2: Being interested in math
What steps do I need to take to achieve this goal?
  Step 1: Solving fun math problems such as logic puzzles or sudoku
  Step 2: Reading books about math
  Step 3: Loving math!^^

 Goal 3: Concentrating on my study
What steps do I need to take to achieve this goal?
  Step 1: Cleaning the room before studying
  Step 2: Doing something I like
  Step 3: Trying not to think about something else.

  
These are my plans in GLPS.
Wish me good luck~~~~~~~~~~~~^^



Wednesday, January 2, 2013

All About me!

Hello!^^ Welcome to the "Peek in You"! I'm Yujung Lee. I am a student who wants to be a psychologist. I also want to be a psychiatrist, if I can. I want to help teenagers in puberty.
Making a world with no stress is my dream!
My favorite sport is gymnastics. I have done gymnastics since I was in 1st grade. It is a little hard and tiring, but I still enjoy it. My favorite singer is Taylor Swift. I love her songs ♡!

This is one of Taylor Swift's song, "You Belong With Me"